I'm deep into my
novel, a tale of 19th Century street life, so I've been spending a lot of time
with my protagonist, Miss Patience Baker of Rotherhithe. She's good company,
and I enjoy our time together, but something struck me today. What does she do
when I'm not there?
I know a lot about
Patience. I should do. I created her. But as I write, and think, and plan, she
grows and deepens. She's becoming her own person. Sometimes this means I have
to have a plot re-think. Sometimes she gives me just what I need to make the story
sing. Sometimes she refuses to co-operate and I have to stop and listen. She's
usually right.
I realise this makes
me sounds a touch insane, but you know what I mean, don't you? If you don't,
then you need to start listening to your characters. Let them off the leash.
Let them figure out their own story. So how do you do this?
Spend time with
them. A lot of time. Not just writing time or planning time, either. Give them
a space in your heart as well as your head, and listen to them. Talk to them.
OK so people may cross the road as you come muttering and laughing towards them
(or is that just me?), but it's worth it. When you catch your character off
guard, she will open up and tell you all sorts of little details that you
didn't know you needed to know. Patience has never had money. She's just run
away from the workhouse. I had no idea, until she told me, that she longed for
a perfect pair of leather boots with tiny buttons.
When you read other
people's work, think about what your character would do in that situation.
Would they find an inner strength? Would they go against everything they
believe in? Would they have courage or would they run away?
Think about the
parts of your story that are not on the page. You don't write about every
minute of every day, so what do they do when you're not there? Do they have
interests that you hadn't considered? Do they lie there brooding over past
injustices or do they consciously try to move on from them? Do they have fun?
How? What are the tiny things they take pleasure in?
Character charts are
all well and good but they don't bring anyone to life. Although they are mighty
useful for consistency! I truly believe that your characters can teach you so
much if you give them the freedom to be themselves. So, go on. Give them a chance!
Love that you discovered your character's longing for boots with buttons. Characters are funny aren't they? Sometimes they're brash and so forthcoming it feels like you're taking dictation. Sometimes they are so timid you have to pretend you're not looking to trick them into coming out!
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